改錯(cuò)練習(xí)18篇 Sep 1, 2013
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(1)
When I talked with the man, I found that from his childhood he develops the habit of carrying the book in his pocket all the time. He was used to read every minute when he had anything else to do. He found a book especial useful during the periods of waiting: waiting doctors, meals ,buses and so on.. That is how he found himself fifteen minute a day for reading. That was how she read twenty books a year---one thousand of books all his lifetime.
(2)
What a long winter vacation! I stay at home doing nothing except homework every day like robot. One day, a idea occurred to me: “Why not to find a part-time job to learn something new?” The next morning, after visit many shops, I was lucky enough to find one in a small but pretty cake shop. When a tired—looking old man came in to buy some cakes, I immediate helped him sit down in a chair and brought him the cake. After he paid them, I said thanks to him. He looked too happy that he praised me with a satisfied smile. From this , I learned: “Be good to others or they’ll be good to you.”
(3) Good
After shopping, Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch". I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. They ate silently, and it was clearly that things were not going well. As we left, Mother stopped on their table. "Excuse me," she said, put her arm around the unhappy old woman. "You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug (擁抱) you?" The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it. After we left, I said, "That was very nice of you, Mother. So I didn't think she looked like Grandma. " "Neither did me," said Mother cheerfully.
(4)
Christine was just a girl in one of my classes. I never knew much about her except for that she was strange. She didn’t talk many. Her hair was black and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater, even in the summer. She was, in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed care what the rest of us thought about her. Like the rest of my classmate, I didn’t really want to get closest to her. It was only when we did their chemistry project together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did .
(5)
My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. It was turned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for I just thought it was funny!
(6)
I’m good all the subjects, and always ready help others. At school I get along well with my classmates. Therefore, I have a problem that troubles myself all the time. It’s the relationship among my deskmate and me. He is a hard-working student, who keeps school rule well. But he’s a person with a few words. What’s more, he got angry easily. I don’t know how to deal with him. Maybe it’s why we’ve seldom sat down to exchange our feelings or thoughts. I value our friendship. I hope we can know more about each other and understand each other better. I do hope we will be close to each other than before.
(7)
Although it was autumn, but it was snowing in Tibet. It was such cold that our legs felt like blocks of ice. On the late afternoon, we found that our water bottles froze because cold weather. But we still enjoyed us during the journey. At one point, we were surprising to find ourselves cycling through clouds. In the valleys colorful butterflies fly around us. It was a great fun to cycle down the hills as it gradual became much warmer. So we had to change our warm coats for T–shirt and shorts.
(8)
College student have a few ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart this, many good students can win a scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As to me, I only let my parents pay half of their fees because they are rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school students maths, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship.
(9)
I am angry about the act of dishonest in exams. I’m not saying that I’m a good student or I’ve never cheated. I once write the answer on my hand for a history test but, unluckily, I caught by my English teacher. Because she was one of my favorites, there were no words to describe how sorry I felt at the moment. I thought cheat would help me keeps my straight A’s. Little I know that I was hurting not only me but also my teachers. From this lesson I know teachers want students to succeed by learning with their own, by do their best, but not by cheating.
(10)
Friendship is very important. Everyone need friendship. In all our lives we can’t live with friendship just as we can’t live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kind of difficulties. But real friendship is no easy to come about. True friendship must be sincerely and be based on understand each other. A good friend can always be a good teacher. By a friend’s advices we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore more friends we have, the better we can improve ourselves.
(11)
My secret of staying young is simple: keeping your mind awake and you will stay young all over. Take an interest in world around you, and learn at least one new thing every day. Don’t think that you are ever too old go back to school. I know a man who entered medical college in 70. He get his degree with honors and became a famous doctor. Other man went to law school at 71 and is now a active lawyer. You may say that stay young is easy only for those live in the future. In fact, you can do it whether you care enough to try to keep your mind awake and active, which is the only way to be always young.
(12)
My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There was a time when I swim like a rock. This went on till one day when I was fishing with a friend of mine at nearby pond. I slipped into one. Has my friend not come to my rescue, I would have been drowned. Ever since then, I had come to know the importance of learning to swim. I didn’t attend any training class but learned it all by myself. Strangely, I have no difficult swimming at all now. Though the way I swim look awkward (笨拙的), it can keep me float. Thinking of this, I feel quite satisfying.
(13)
In a summer night in Taiwan, Xiao Hong was going on her way to school happily then suddenly she felt the street was violent shaking. The trees were torn up and many buildings are leaning down to the ground. Even a car was destroyed by fallen buildings. She was knocked down by a tree before she knew. Two doctors carried him to safety and she was settled down in a tent for treatment. After some time, she recovered. Seeing such many goods from the mainland of China and other country, she believed all the destroyed houses would be built.
(14)
I’m glad to write to you. It is near a month since you had left our hospital. I’m still worried about you. How are you get along these days? I think you may be much better now, but you’d better have a good rest and take good care of you since you are sixty-year-old man. I still remember those days which you helped me to my English. In your help, I make good progress. To my regret, my English is still not good enough though I have made good use of my time. Can you give me some advices on it?
(15)
One day I was dining with my friend Zhou in a McDonald then two young girls came in hand in hand. While enjoyed a hamburger, I found Zhou staring something with curiosity. I rose my eyes to see what was happening. The two girls are making gestures skillfully. Obviously they were deaf-mutes. I had learned some sign languages ago, so I showed various gestures with Zhou following me in high spirit. We played and laughed cheerfully as if there were no one else present. Suddenly we saw both the girls glaring at us. Before we could explain them, they had walked out angrily, left the food unfinished. They thought we were making fun of them. How I regretted!
(16)
We often think insects to be harmless. This is part true. Many an insect are harmful. Flies carry diseases. Others insects carry diseases, too. Farmers are at war with insects most the time. Hunger insects kill crops in the fields. Farmers spray the field as to get rid of these insects. Do this mean that all insects are harmful? No. Many are of great helpful to man. Bees make honey. Without bees and other insects, many tree would have no fruit. Silkworms make silk. Some insects eat other insects that kill fruit trees.
(17)
Today we were organized for a short trip to the West Hill. We set out by the school bus at 7:30 a.m. The weather was pleasure and every one of us was excited. After two hour’s ride, we arrived there at nine thirty. We began our programs the moment we got off from the bus. We played games on the hillside and swim in the river. After that we had our picnic lunch. In the afternoon we walked along the river, that winds around the hills. We took a lot of photo and enjoyed ourselves very much. Time past quickly and we had to go back. It was past five o’clock then we returned school. What a good trip we had today! I’ll never forget it.
(18)
It’s important of us to keep good eyesight. But do you know what to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work long . You’d better have a rest, looking in the long distance after you’ve studied an hour and so. Second, pay attention for the following: Don’t read in the sun or in a poor light; don’t read in bed or in a moving bus. And when read you should keep a book away from your eye for a foot. Third, do eye-exercises every day, that will also help you keeps good eyesight. If you obey the rules, I think, you may prevent yourself from become short-sighted.
短文改錯(cuò)答案
(1)
When I talked with the man, I found that from his childhood he develops the
developed
habit of carrying the book in his pocket
a
all the time. He was used to read every
reading
minute when he had anything else to do.
nothing
He found a book especial useful during
especially
the periods of waiting: waiting ^ doctors,
for
meals ,buses and so on. That is how he
was
found himself fifteen minute a day
minutes
for reading. That was how she read
he
twenty books a year-----one thousand of
刪除
books all his lifetime.
(2)
What a long winter vacation! I stay
stayed
at home doing nothing except home
work every day like ^robot.
a
One day, a idea occurred to me: “Why
an
not to find a part-time job to learn
刪掉
something new?” The next morning,
after visit many shops, I was lucky
visiting
enough to find one in a small but pretty
cake shop. When a tired—looking old
man came in to buy some cakes, I
immediate helped him sit down in a
immediately
chair and brought him the cake. After
cakes
he paid^ them, I said thanks to him. He
for
looked too happy that he praised me
so
with a satisfied smile. From this , I
learned: “Be good to others or they’ll
and
be good to you.”
(3)
After shopping, Mother and I went to a
restaurant for lunch. I notice Mother
noticed
looking at a nearby table occupy by
occupied
an elderly woman and ∧ young
a
couple. They ate silently, and it was
clearly that things were not going well.
clear
As we left, Mother stopped on their
by/at
table. "Excuse me," she said, put her arm
putting
around the unhappy old woman. "You
remind me so many of my mother.
much
May I hug (擁抱) you?" The woman
smiled happily as she accepted to it.
刪掉
After we left, I said, "That was very
nice of you, Mother. So I didn't think
But
she looked like Grandma. " "Neither
did me," said Mother cheerfully.
I
(4)
Christine was just a girl in one of my classes. I never knew much about her
except for that she was strange. She
didn’t talk many. Her hair was black
much
and purple, and she worn black sports
wore
shoes and a black sweater, even in the
summer. She was, in fact, rather
attractively, and she never seemed
attractive but
^care what the rest of us thought
to
about her. Like the rest of my classmate
classmates
, I didn’t really want to get closest to her.
close
It was only when we did their
our
chemistry project together that I begin to
began
understand why Christine dressed the
way she did .
(5)
My sister saw a lovely cup when we are
were
shopping the other day. She liked it at
once. Then she bent down and picked ^
it
up to look at a price on it. As she did this
the
, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt! I had
her
to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked
hard
face! My sister wanted ^ get out of the
to
shop as fast as she could when a shop
assistant came over to us. It w\as turned
out t o be her own cup, that she’d left on
which
the shelf by mistake. The assistant was
clearly as embarrassing as my sister,
embarrassed
for I just thought it was funny!
And
(6)
I’m good ^all the subjects, and
at
always ready^ help others. At school I
to
get along well with my classmates.
Therefore, I have a problem that troubles
However
myself all the time. It’s the relationship
me
among my deskmate and me. He is a
between
hard-working student, who keeps school
rule well. But he’s a person with a few
rues 刪掉
words. What’s more, he got angry easily.
gets
I don’t know how to deal with him.
Maybe it’s why we’ve seldom sat down
because
to exchange our feelings or thoughts. I
value our friendship. I hope we can
know more about each other and
understand each other better. I do hope
we will be close to each other than
closer
before.
(7)
Although it was autumn, but it was
去掉
snowing in Tibet. It was such cold that
so
our legs felt like blocks of ice. On the
In
late afternoon, we found that our water
bottles froze because ^cold weather.
of
But we still enjoyed us during the
ourselves
journey. At one point, we were
surprising to find ourselves cycling
surprised
through clouds. In the valleys colorful
butterflies fly around us. It was a great
flew 刪掉
fun to cycle down the hills as it gradual
gradually
became much warmer. So we had to change our warm coats for T–shirt and
T-shirts
shorts.
(8)
College student have a few ways to pay
students
their college fees. Many students have
their parents to pay the fees. Some
刪掉
students may apply to a bank loan and
for
others will try to find part-time jobs in
and out of the campus. Apart ∧this,
from
many good students can win a
scholarship. By this way they can pay
In
at least part of the fees. As to me, I only
let my parents pay half of their fees
my
because they are ∧ rich enough.
not
Beside my study, I will take up a
Besides
part-time job by teach some high
teaching
school students math, physics,
chemistry and English, as I’m very
good at these important subjects. Of
course I will also work very hard at my
lessons in order to I can easily win a
that
scholarship.
(9)
I am angry about the act of dishonest in
dishonesty
exams. I’m not saying that I’m a good
student or ∧ I’ve never cheated. I
that
once write the answer on my hand for a
wrote
history test but unluckily I∧ caught
was
by my English teacher. Because she
was one of my favorites, there were no words to describe how sorry I
felt at the moment. I thought cheat would
cheating
help me keeps my straight A’s. Little∧I
keep did
know that I was hurting not only me
myself
but also my teachers. From this lesson I know teachers want students
to succeed by learning with their own ,
on
by do the best they can, but not by cheating.
doing
(10)
Friendship is very important. Everyone need friendship. In all our lives we can’t
needs
live with friendship just as we can’t live
without
without air and water. Friendship makes
us getting on well with one another
get
to go ahead under different kind of
kinds
difficulties . But real friendship is no
not
easy to come about. True friendship
must be sincerely and be based on
sincere
understand each other . A good friend
understanding
can always be a good teacher . By a
friend’s advices we are persuading to go
advice persuaded
the right way. Therefore ∧ more
the
friends we have, the better we can improve ourselves.
(11)
My secret of staying young is simple:
keeping your mind awake and you will
keep
stay young all over. Take an interest in
∧ world around you, and learn at least
the
one new thing every day. Don’t think
that you are ever too old ∧ go back to
to
school. I know a man who entered
medical college in 70. He get his degree
at got
with honors and became a famous doctor
. Other man went to law school at 71
Another
and is now a active lawyer. You may say
an
that stay young is easy only for those
staying
live in the future. In fact, you can do it
living或在live前加who
whether you care enough to try to keep
if
your mind awake and active, which is the only way to be always young.
(12)
My swimming experience is extreme
extremely
interesting. There was a time when I
swim like a rock. This went on till one
swam
day when I was fishing with a friend of
mine at ∧ nearby pond. I slipped
a
into one. Has my friend not come to my
it Had
rescue, I would have been drowned.
Ever since then, I had come to know the
have
importance of learning to swim. I didn’t
attend any training class but learned it all
by myself. Strangely, I have no
difficult swimming at all now. Though
difficulty
the way I swim look awkward (笨拙的),
looks
at least it can keep me float. Thinking of
floating
this, I feel quite satisfying.
satisfied
(13)
In a summer night in Taiwan, Xiao Hong
On
was going on her way to school happily
then suddenly she felt the street was
when
violent shaking. The trees were torn up
violently
and many buildings are leaning down
were
to the ground. Even a car was destroyed by fallen buildings. She was knocked
falling
down by a tree before she knew ∧.
it
Two doctors carried him to safety and
her
she was settled down in a tent for treatment.
After some time, she recovered. Seeing such many goods
so
from the mainland of China and other country,
countries
she believed all the destroyed houses would be built.
rebuilt
(14)
I’m glad to write to you. It is near a
nearly
month since you had left our hospital.
去掉had
I’m still worried about you. How are you
get along these days? I think you may be
getting
much better now, but you’d have a
good rest and take good care of you
yourself
since you are ∧ sixty-year-old man. I
a
still remember those days which you
when
helped me to my English. In your help, I
with With
make good progress. To my regret
made
, my English is still not good enough
though I have made good use of my time. Can you give me some advices on it?
advice
(15)
One day I was dining with my friend Zhou in a McDonald then two young
when
girls came in hand in hand. While
enjoyed a hamburger, I found Zhou
enjoying
staring ∧ something with curiosity.
at
I rose my eyes to see what was
raised
happening. The two girls are making
were
gestures skillfully. Obviously they were deaf-mutes.
I had learned some sign languages ago, so I showed various
before
gestures with Zhou following me in high spirit.
spirits
We played and laughed cheerfully
as if there were no one else present.
was
Suddenly we saw both the girls glaring at us. Before we could explain∧ them,
to
they had walked out angrily, left the
leaving
food unfinished. They thought we were
making fun of them. How I regretted!
(16)
We often think insects to be harmless.
harmful
This is part true. Many an insect are
partly is
harmful. Flies carry diseases. Others
Other
insects carry diseases, too. Farmers are at war with insects most ∧ the
of
time. Hunger insects kill crops in the
Hungry
fields Farmers spray the field ∧ as to
so
get rid of these insects. Do this mean
Does
that all insects are harmful? No. Many are of great helpful to man. Bees make
help
honey. Without bees and other insects, many tree would have no fruit.
trees
Silkworms make silk. Some insects eat
other insects that kill fruit trees.
(17)
Today we were organized for a short trip to the West Hill. We set out by the
in
school bus at 7:30 a.m. The weather was pleasure and every
pleasant
one of us was excited
After two hour's ride, we
hours’
arrived there at nine thirty. We began our programs the moment
we got off from the bus. We played games on the
去掉
hillside and swim in the river. After that
swam
we had our picnic lunch. In the afternoon we walked along the river, that winds
which
around the hills. We took a lot of photo
photos
and enjoyed ourselves very much. Time past quickly and we had to go back.
Passed
It was past five o’clock then we returned
when
∧ school. What a good trip we had
to
today! I’ll never forget it.
(18)
It’s important of us to keep good
for
eyesight. But do you know what to
how
protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work long . You’d better have
working
a rest, looking into the distance after you’ve studied an hour and so.
or
Second, pay attention for the following:
to
Don’t read in the sun or in a poor light;
don’t read in bed or in a moving bus. And when read you should keep a book
reading
away from your eye for a foot.
eyes
Third, do eye-exercises every day, that
which
will also help you keeps good eyesight.
keep
If you obey the rules, I think, you may prevent yourself from become
becoming
short-sighted.
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