分類研讀書(shū)面表達(dá)真題，助飛高考寫(xiě)作
文 | 廣東省普寧市華美實(shí)驗(yàn)學(xué)校 陳碎仍
高考的腳步越來(lái)越近，許多考生仍因?yàn)樽约鹤魑牡膹?qiáng)差人意而惴惴不安，而又無(wú)從入手。筆者以為，越是臨近，要快速提高本部分的秘訣仍在于潛心研讀、背誦一些真題和模擬題范文，對(duì)其進(jìn)行分類整理，強(qiáng)記各類書(shū)信對(duì)應(yīng)的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾，尤其不同體裁的關(guān)鍵用詞。
對(duì)于一篇好的作文，筆者認(rèn)為有2點(diǎn)尤為重要：
1.審體裁。明確體裁，方能明確文章開(kāi)頭的寫(xiě)作目的以及結(jié)尾段的關(guān)鍵用詞或可套用句型；另外，這點(diǎn)有時(shí)對(duì)信件表述所使用的語(yǔ)氣也非常重要；
2.養(yǎng)成將寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容分為3段的模式和思維習(xí)慣，并明確對(duì)三個(gè)段落的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行劃分。第一段包含：
(1)考慮是否需要進(jìn)行自我介紹（有的需要，有的不需要）；
(2)判斷需交代的背景信息及其位置。（尤其對(duì)于書(shū)信，有的背景信息置于寫(xiě)信目的之前，如邀請(qǐng)信，求職信等；而有的置于其后，如道歉信中的因何事道歉）
對(duì)此，作者整理了近10年一些高考真題和部分模擬題，希望能在最后階段能助各位考生一臂之力。建議大家多留意各提供范文的開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾和筆者加下劃線部分，尤其是其用詞；另外，大家不妨多多研讀范文中的一些狀語(yǔ)和定語(yǔ)的處理，揣摩一些非謂語(yǔ)或介詞短語(yǔ)，甚至于插入語(yǔ)的用法，爭(zhēng)取從中獲益。
【2016·新課標(biāo)全國(guó)II 】
假定你是李華，你校攝影俱樂(lè)部（photography club）將舉辦國(guó)際中學(xué)攝影展。請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友Peter寫(xiě)封信，請(qǐng)他提供作品。信的內(nèi)容包括：
1.主題：環(huán)境保護(hù)；
2.展覽時(shí)間；
3.投稿郵箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
Dear Peter,
An International High School Student Photography Show, organized by our school photography club, is to be held from June 15th and last for three weeks with the theme of environmental protection. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. Therefore, I am writing to invite you to take part in the activity.
Amateur photographer as you are, I know you really take good pictures and that you have always been longing to do something for environmental protection. I sincerely hope that you can spare some time to select some on that theme and let more people enjoy your wonderful works. If interested, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【2015·新課標(biāo)全國(guó)II】
假如你是李華，計(jì)劃和同學(xué)去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人們過(guò)重陽(yáng)節(jié)（the Double Ninth Festival）。請(qǐng)給外教Lucy寫(xiě)封郵件，邀她一同前往，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 出發(fā)及返回時(shí)間；
2. 活動(dòng)：包餃子、表演節(jié)目等。
Dear Lucy,
Aiming to express our love and care for the elderly, we students intend to go on a visit to the nearby nursing home for the Double Ninth Festival next Saturday. It is a meaningful activity because it is the day for the elderly in our culture and I am writing to invite you to join us.
As is scheduled, we will leave school by bus at 9:00 a.m. and be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. After our arrival, there will be many activities, such as making dumplings and cakes, giving performances, playing games, and so on.
Please let me know whether it’s convenient for you to come with us. Looking forward to your joining us.
Yours
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評(píng)：這2篇都屬于邀請(qǐng)信。邀請(qǐng)信的要點(diǎn)是：1.因何事邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方參加該活動(dòng)；2.邀請(qǐng)人需了解的與活動(dòng)相關(guān)的信息；3.希望對(duì)方能應(yīng)邀參加。建議背誦范文的開(kāi)頭段與結(jié)尾段，可以作為此類書(shū)信的萬(wàn)能句子。
【2016·新課標(biāo)全國(guó)I】
假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫(xiě)好申請(qǐng)書(shū)和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷（resume）。給外教Mr Jenkins 寫(xiě)信，請(qǐng)她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式。
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I am Li Hua, one of your students last term, and I am writing to ask you to do me a favor.
In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company in the approaching summer holiday. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. However, it is the first time that I have written an application and resume, so I am not quite sure of the language and the format I have used. I would appreciate it if you could take some time to go through my application letter and resume attached and make some necessary changes.
Extremely thankful for that and looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【2007全國(guó)卷Ⅰ】
假定你是李華，希望通過(guò)外籍教師Peter找一個(gè)英語(yǔ)筆友。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封短信，描述一下你理想中筆友的條件，并說(shuō)明為什么選這樣的筆友。具體條件包括：
1. 年齡；
2. 性別；
3. 愛(ài)好（旅游、運(yùn)動(dòng)、寵物等）。
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students. I’m writing to see whether it is convenient for you to do me a favor.
Aiming to improve my English as well as learning more about western cultures, I expect to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who not only is interested in traveling and swimming, but also has a pet dog as I do. I believe that it will be a great pleasure to have such a friend, with whom I can share our traveling experiences or how to take care of pets.
I would appreciate it if you could introduce me such a perfect pen friend. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評(píng)：這2篇都屬于求助信。對(duì)于求助信，交代清楚要對(duì)方幫忙的事件是很重要的。另外，此類信件還有注意語(yǔ)言表述的委婉和禮貌性。值得一提的是，第3篇第二部分其實(shí)屬于介紹類文體，針對(duì)此類文體，若能靈活運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)和介詞短語(yǔ)，將為您的作文增色不少。如：In the shape of a diamond, each about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide, these knots look extremely beautiful but are only 12.99 US dollars each.中，In the shape of a diamond介詞短語(yǔ)來(lái)說(shuō)明中國(guó)結(jié)的形狀；each about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)說(shuō)明其長(zhǎng)寬。
【2014 全國(guó)卷I】
假定你是李華，計(jì)劃暑假間去英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)，為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意，請(qǐng)給該校寫(xiě)封信，詢問(wèn)有關(guān)情況（箭頭所指內(nèi)容）
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a student in China. I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the approaching summer vacation. I’ve seen your ad. on the Internet, and quite interested, I am writing for more/further relevant information about your six -week English course.
First of all, would you please tell me when the course will start and how many students a class consists of? Besides, how many class hours are there per week and how much I have to pay for the course? In addition, I wonder whether accommodation is included. Meanwhile will students live with a host family or in student accommodation /university dormitory?
I would appreciate it if you could give me a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours
Li Hua
【2005全國(guó)卷Ⅰ 】
假定你是李華，正在英國(guó)牛津參加短期語(yǔ)言培訓(xùn)，計(jì)劃星期天去倫敦旅游?；ヂ?lián)網(wǎng)上一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確（箭頭所指內(nèi)容）。請(qǐng)給該旅行社發(fā)一封電子郵件，詢問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。
Dear Sir/Madame,
I am Li Hua, a Chinese student taking a language training course at Oxford University. I happened to come across your ad. on the Internet. Quite interested, I am writing for more/further information about the day tour to London.
Above all, I wonder whether there is a discount for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover all the entrance fees for visiting the places listed as well as lunch? Besides, would you be kind enough to inform me when we will return? Last but not least, is there any time for shopping? I have been longing to have a look at the big stores in London.
I would appreciate it if you could give me a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評(píng)：詢問(wèn)信類的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾基本可以當(dāng)萬(wàn)能句型強(qiáng)記下來(lái)，另外第二段的詢問(wèn)信息部分，建議可以采用陳述與疑問(wèn)句混用的形式，增強(qiáng)句子的多變性。
【2015全國(guó)I】
書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分25分）
假定你是李華，你校英文報(bào)“外國(guó)文化”欄目擬刊登介紹美國(guó)節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活的短文。請(qǐng)給美國(guó)朋友彼得寫(xiě)信約稿，要點(diǎn)如下：
1. 欄目介紹；
2. 稿件內(nèi)容；
3. 稿件長(zhǎng)度：約400詞；
4. 交稿日期：6月28日前。
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to invite/ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
The “Foreign Cultures” column/section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. And I wonder whether it is convenient for you to write something on the culture in your part of the United States. We would especially welcome articles concerning how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, as well as the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?
Looking forward to your early reply and seeing your interesting articles.
Yours,
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評(píng)：約稿信一般開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信目的。第二段的著眼于所要稿件的內(nèi)容類型和其他要求。
【2010遼寧卷 】
你校學(xué)生會(huì)需招聘一名留學(xué)生做英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)顧問(wèn)，請(qǐng)你以短文形式寫(xiě)一則招聘啟事。內(nèi)容主要包括：
——母語(yǔ)是英語(yǔ)，漢語(yǔ)流利者優(yōu)先
——解答英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)問(wèn)題，協(xié)助組織英語(yǔ)活動(dòng)
——每周4小時(shí)，報(bào)酬面議
——聯(lián)系人：李華（Tel:13011223344）
English Advisor Wanted
The Student Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term.
The advisor’s main tasks include helping answer students’ questions in learning English and helping organize activities such as singing English songs, English evenings, and so on. The applicant should be a native English speaker. Furthermore, the candidate who also has a good command of Chinese is preferred. Besides, the advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week.
If you are interested, please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview. Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview.
Student Union
點(diǎn)評(píng)：招聘啟事要點(diǎn)：1. 招聘職位的基本信息（招聘單位和招聘對(duì)象，有時(shí)還會(huì)涉及職位性質(zhì)， 如全職，兼職或志愿者工作）2. 職位職責(zé)和要求 3.簡(jiǎn)要涉及福利待遇，并提供聯(lián)系方式。
【2011遼寧卷 】
假定你是李華，將于今年七月從新星外語(yǔ)學(xué)校畢業(yè)，你從報(bào)紙上得知B&B公司要招聘一名英文秘書(shū)，你很感興趣。請(qǐng)給該公司寫(xiě)一封求職信，包括下列要點(diǎn)：
1.年齡；
2.學(xué)習(xí)情況及英語(yǔ)水平；
3.興趣和特長(zhǎng)；
4.性格特點(diǎn)。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary. Quite interested in this position, I’ am writing to apply for it.
I, aged 18 years old, am to graduate from Xinxing Foreign Languages School this July. As an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students, I have a good command of English, especially spoken English. Besides, I often use the computer and I type very fast. In my spare time, I read a lot and like sports as well as outdoor activities. Last but not least, being a good team player, I'm easy to get along with.
I would appreciate it if I could have a chance to work for you. Looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評(píng)：求職信有幾點(diǎn)是可以背一些萬(wàn)能句子的，如信息來(lái)源，寫(xiě)信目的和結(jié)尾。另外，對(duì)于第二段的主體部分，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意：要點(diǎn)一定放在體現(xiàn)你所具有的，該職位所要求的相關(guān)能力上。
【2012 全國(guó)卷 I 】
假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知一個(gè)國(guó)際中學(xué)生組織將在新加坡(Singapore)舉辦夏令營(yíng)，歡迎各國(guó)學(xué)生參加。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封電子郵件申請(qǐng)參加。
內(nèi)容主要包括:
I.自我介紹(包括英語(yǔ)能力);
2.參加意圖(介紹中國(guó)、了解其他國(guó)家);
3.希望獲準(zhǔn).
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I learn from the Internet that a summer camp is to be held in Singapore and that students from different countries are welcome to take part in it. Quite interested, I am writing to apply to participate.
Having been learning English for 10 years, I speak fluent English. What’s more, I am really dying to seize the opportunity to learn more about other countries. Meanwhile, it is also my great honour to introduce anything relevant to China if others are interested.
I would highly appreciate it if I could be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours;
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意申請(qǐng)信與求職信的區(qū)別，尤其是第二部分，求職信以體現(xiàn)自己符合某職位要求為主；而申請(qǐng)信，是以希望自己的某種訴求被通過(guò)、獲準(zhǔn)為主，注意兩者尤其是結(jié)尾處的區(qū)別。
【2011新課標(biāo)】
假設(shè)你是李華，正在一所英國(guó)學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)暑期課程，遇到一些困難，希望得到學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)中心（Learning Center）的幫助。根據(jù)學(xué)校規(guī)定，你需書(shū)面預(yù)約，請(qǐng)按下列要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一封信：
1.本人簡(jiǎn)介；
2.求助內(nèi)容；
3.約定時(shí)間；
4.你的聯(lián)系方式（Email：lihua@1236.com；phone：12345678）。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. Coming across some difficulties and informed that the Learning Center provides help for students in need, I’m writing to ask for help.
This being my first experience to attend a foreign school, I have some difficulty in taking notes in classes. Besides, I have no idea of how to make good use of the library. Therefore, I would appreciate any suggestions you may have. I wonder whether it is convenient for you to make an appointment with me on Tuesday mornings or Friday afternoons since I have no class then. You can get in touch with me by sending an email to lihua@1236.com or calling me at 12345678.
I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor and I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評(píng)：這個(gè)預(yù)約信其實(shí)是求助與預(yù)約的結(jié)合版：既要交代清楚存在的問(wèn)題，又要說(shuō)明預(yù)約見(jiàn)面的時(shí)間和聯(lián)系方式。對(duì)于預(yù)約信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1.因何事預(yù)見(jiàn)對(duì)方；2.預(yù)約見(jiàn)面的時(shí)間/地點(diǎn)和聯(lián)系方式。
【2008全國(guó)卷II】
假定你是李華, 你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來(lái)信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文. 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)回信. 要點(diǎn):
1. 參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班;
2. 看中文書(shū)刊、電視；
3. 學(xué)唱中文歌曲；
4. 交中國(guó)朋友。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Also, it is my great pleasure to give you some advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Above all, I feel it significant to take a Chinese course, which not only gives you a good chance to learn from the teachers but also practice what you learn with your fellow students. Besides, it would be a good idea to watch some TV programs as well as read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese or try to learn and sing some Chinese songs. Last but not least, I suggest that you make more Chinese friends, who will also help you improve your Chinese.
I sincerely hope that you will find the advice I share above helpful. May you make great progress in Chinese!
Yours,
Li Hua
【2016屆山東滕州一中學(xué)高三10月月考】
假如你是英國(guó)的Jack，你的朋友李曉打算到國(guó)外留學(xué)，他寫(xiě)信詢問(wèn)你什么樣的中國(guó)學(xué)生最受國(guó)外高校青睞。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給對(duì)方寫(xiě)一封回信：
1.語(yǔ)言是道硬門檻；
2.適應(yīng)能力很重要；
3.興趣愛(ài)好被看重；
4.要有社會(huì)責(zé)任感。
Dear Li Xiao,
I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. Also, it is my great pleasure to share some information concerning what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities with you.
As far as I know, the language ability is essential/vital, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses. Besides, the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment also counts a lot. In addition, most colleges and universities attach great importance to students’ interests, for they have a lot to do with success. Last but not least, those who are willing to shoulder/take/undertake social responsibility are especially respected and welcome.
I sincerely hope that you will find all I share above helpful. May you succeed and be admitted into an ideal university.
Yours，
Jack
【2012全國(guó)卷II 】
假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Peter曾表示希望來(lái)中國(guó)教書(shū)。你?，F(xiàn)在需招聘外教，請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)封信，告知招聘信息。內(nèi)容主要包括：
1.教授課程：英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)、英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作、今日美國(guó)、今日英語(yǔ)等
2.授課對(duì)象：高中生（至少三年英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)）
3. 工作量： — 每周 12 學(xué)時(shí)，任選三門課 — 擔(dān)任學(xué)生英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部或英語(yǔ)校報(bào)顧問(wèn)（advisor）
Dear Peter,
I remember you once told me you were interested in teaching in China. And it happens that our school is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior students. Therefore, I am writing to inform you of some relevant information.
First of all, the teacher, once employed, can choose three of the following four courses--Speaking, Writing, America Today and Britain Today, and works 12 hours a week. Besides, the students to take these courses all have at least three years of English learning experiences. Apart from teaching, the teacher is also required to work as an advisor in our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper.
Please write soon and let me know whether you are interested. If you have any other questions, I will also be more than happy to help.
Yours,
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是兩篇信息轉(zhuǎn)告信，但仍有區(qū)別，一封是回復(fù)類，一封直接寫(xiě)信告知招聘信息。注意它們與前一類建議信的區(qū)別，最為明顯的一點(diǎn)就是語(yǔ)言的表述更具客觀性，用詞遣句不帶有濃烈的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度。
【2016全國(guó)卷3】
假定你是李華，與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書(shū)店，因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歉意；2.說(shuō)明原因；3.另約時(shí)間。
Dear Bob,
I am writing to apologize for not being able to go to Xinhua Bookstore by appointment this Friday afternoon, because I have just been informed of attending an important class meeting that afternoon.
I’m extremely sorry for that and I wonder whether it is convenient for you to make it another time and go on Saturday morning. I hope we can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. And how about meeting at 8:30 outside the school gate? If you are not available, please inform me of it so that we can set some other time for that?
Once again I sincerely apologize for any inconvenience caused.
Yours,
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評(píng)：道歉信注意其內(nèi)容銜接：寫(xiě)信目的：道歉（為何事道歉）—原因—如何彌補(bǔ)—再次表明歉意
假設(shè)你叫李華，現(xiàn)是武漢大學(xué)的一名新生。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，給你中學(xué)的英語(yǔ)老師李老師寫(xiě)一封感謝信，表達(dá)對(duì)他的愛(ài)戴和尊敬。要點(diǎn)如下：
1.對(duì)英語(yǔ)李老師教學(xué)的評(píng)價(jià)。
2.回顧在校時(shí)你的心情。
3.對(duì)老師的理解和祝愿。
Dear Mr Li,
I am Li Hua, now a freshman of Wuhan University, which I have been dreaming about. I’m writing to express my sincere thanks to you for helping me improve my English.
I still remember the days when you taught me English. Thanks to your creative work, my English has been improved greatly. However, at one time, the pressure of examinations and the high expectations made me depressed. Luckily, you often encouraged me not to give up. Without your assistance and encouragement, I wouldn’t have the chance to go to college and realized my dream.
Now I really understand you and sincerely thank you again for what you have done for me. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. May you lead a happy life!
Yours,
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評(píng)：感謝信寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1. 因何事向?qū)Ψ奖硎靖兄x；2. 事情的具體細(xì)節(jié)；3.再次表達(dá)感謝/向?qū)Ψ奖磉_(dá)美好祝愿。
你是李華，兩周前你從網(wǎng)上一套書(shū)蟲(chóng)系列讀物（Bookworm Series）昨天才到貨，且包裝破損，數(shù)量不足。請(qǐng)就此向網(wǎng)店客服寫(xiě)郵件投訴。要點(diǎn)如下：
1. 介紹購(gòu)物情況
2. 反映存在問(wèn)題
3. 提出解決方案
Dear Dir,
I am one of your customers. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the poor Web service I have received.
I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.
It’s my sincere hope that you can investigate the matter seriously and have the matter settled properly, giving me a full refund or delivering a new set of books to me. Looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評(píng)：投訴信的要點(diǎn)：1. 因何事向?qū)Ψ教岢鐾对V（make a complaint about…/complain about…）；2. 具體存在的問(wèn)題； 3. 希望對(duì)方能重視并妥善解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題。
[2009年全國(guó)卷（寧夏、海南卷）]
假設(shè)你是李華，正在英國(guó)接受英語(yǔ)培訓(xùn)，住在一戶英國(guó)人家里。今天的房東Mrs Wilson不在家，你準(zhǔn)備外出，請(qǐng)給Mrs Wilson寫(xiě)一留言條，內(nèi)容包括：
1.外出購(gòu)物
2.替房東還書(shū)
3.Tracy來(lái)電話留言：
(1) 咖啡屋（Bolton coffee）見(jiàn)面取消
(2) 此事已告知Susan
June 7th
Mrs. Wilson,
I’m going out shopping and won’t be back until about 5:00 p.m.. I have taken the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt extremely sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. And she has already told Susan about this change.
Yours,
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評(píng)：此留言條為提綱類書(shū)面表達(dá)，只需將所列內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)交代清楚即可（切記不可遺漏）。另外做好信息點(diǎn)之間的銜接、過(guò)渡則將為你的文章加分。
[2009年全國(guó)卷（遼寧卷）]
假定你住在一個(gè)涉外小區(qū)。社區(qū)委員會(huì)請(qǐng)你幫忙用英文以短文的形式寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。
要點(diǎn)：
時(shí)間：下周六上午8：00至11：00
內(nèi)容：采摘蘋(píng)果
報(bào)名：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前
提示：帶帽子、手套
Dear neighbors,
We are more than happy to announce that next Saturday morning we'll have a public activity, picking apples in a village 8 kilometers away from our community. It will last three hours and we will leave by bus at 8:00 a.m. and be back around 11 am.. Those who would like to participate can sign up in the community office before 5:00 pm. next Thursday. Besides, it is suggested that you wear a hat and gloves to protect yourselves well. Everyone is warmly welcome to take part in it.
The Community Office
點(diǎn)評(píng)：這封郵件（其實(shí)郵件也是書(shū)信，只不過(guò)是當(dāng)前互聯(lián)網(wǎng)時(shí)代下更便捷的一種信息互通方式罷了）也是提綱類書(shū)面表達(dá)。從內(nèi)容看其實(shí)是一個(gè)通知，若此篇的要求是寫(xiě)一則社區(qū)通知，則將Dear neighbors改為NOTICE置于中間即可。通知往往針對(duì)某活動(dòng)，所以需交代清楚通知的事件、對(duì)象，活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)（有時(shí)也包括報(bào)名方式）和注意事項(xiàng)即可。
【2014陜西卷】
假定你是中學(xué)生李華。美國(guó)一個(gè)中學(xué)校長(zhǎng)代表團(tuán)即將訪問(wèn)你校并出席英語(yǔ)周的一項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和寫(xiě)作要求寫(xiě)一篇?dú)g迎詞。
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1.表示對(duì)客人的歡迎；
2.介紹此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)（如活動(dòng)目的、內(nèi)容等）；
3.表達(dá)對(duì)客人的祝愿。
Dear American Guest,
On behalf of our school, I would like to express/extend our warmest welcome to you. It is our great honour to have your presence here and it is also my great honour to deliver a speech here, saying something about the English Week Activities.
As is scheduled, we have English Talent Show at the Student Centre at two o’clock this afternoon. With the aim of developing our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking, the show consists of various interesting performances and games, such as recitation, singing, story-telling, word spelling and so on. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in some activities. I am convinced that we students will benefit a lot from your presence.
I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you for your listening.
點(diǎn)評(píng)：發(fā)言稿包括歡迎致辭/演講稿等，語(yǔ)言表述要注意發(fā)言者需面對(duì)聽(tīng)眾，另外發(fā)言通常圍繞某一話題。
后記：其實(shí)在歷年的高考中還有一些介紹類文體（如2013年遼寧卷介紹中秋節(jié)，2009年全國(guó)卷介紹北京前門大街，2006年全國(guó)卷介紹學(xué)校圖書(shū)館，甚至在2013請(qǐng)求朋友幫忙賣中國(guó)結(jié)中對(duì)中國(guó)結(jié)的介紹）和描述類文體（如2014年全國(guó)卷Ⅱ中對(duì)我未來(lái)生活的描述），針對(duì)此類文體，
一、要做好提綱，明確自己的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容；
二、適當(dāng)添加相關(guān)信息（注意相關(guān)二字，筆者認(rèn)為添加的信息必須能體現(xiàn)文章中要突出的內(nèi)容或起銜接作用，否則不添加）；
三、表述中在與前兩個(gè)要求不沖突的前提下，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂猛徽Z(yǔ)，介詞短語(yǔ)（尤其是as/with短語(yǔ)），非謂語(yǔ)，復(fù)合句的將為你的文章添色不少。
筆者將就所提及真題列一些句子以參考：
1. Falling on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar, the Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most popular traditional Chinese festivals.
2. I will be twenty-eight years old by then and I am likely to have my own family, probably with a lovely child.
3. In my free time, I'll continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games.
4. Standing for friendship, love and good luck, Chinese knots in China can serve as great gifts to friends or decorations hung in the houses.
5. In the shape of a diamond, each about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide, these knots look extremely beautiful but are only 12.99 US dollars each.
6. As a famous street of over 600 years old, Qianmen Street is 800 meters long with more than 300 shops.
7. Inside the library stands many shelves full of books on different subjects as well as lots of newspapers and magazines.
8. Amateur photographer as you are, I know you really take good pictures and that you have always been longing to do something for environmental protection.
9. An International High School Student Photography Show, organized by our school photography club, is to be held from June 15th and last for three weeks with the theme of environmental protection.
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